tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4125487389247704834.post1431769296958422827..comments2010-03-11T18:21:43.648-08:00Comments on Melanie's Blog: short storymelaniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05314856509717560458noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4125487389247704834.post-11704623665009676922010-02-11T18:36:33.844-08:002010-02-11T18:36:33.844-08:001. The main character is Mary.
2. I would say that...1. The main character is Mary.<br />2. I would say that the conflict is internal at first but turns into external over time and is man vs. circumstances or society.<br />3. The climax is when Mary has the puck and is about to shoot it.<br />4. I thought the resolution worked very well but left the story hanging. It did the job, however.<br />5. The story worked to me. Probably because as a child I also went to my brother’s hockey games and watched movies that were like this like the Mighty Ducks series.<br />6. The story’s greatest strength was probably its emotions that it showed and I sympathized toward the main character at some points.<br />7. It mostly lacked theme, because I don’t really know what the theme should be.Dimitri Kastrohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402285644642740078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4125487389247704834.post-65746829286340534102010-01-31T11:17:28.530-08:002010-01-31T11:17:28.530-08:00infallible, altruistic, garrulous, mollify, acrimo...infallible, altruistic, garrulous, mollify, acrimonious, rebuffed, trepidation, compliant, morose, nefarious, tenacious, harangue, converge, prodigous, garbledmelaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05314856509717560458noreply@blogger.com